如何獲得新SAT寫(xiě)作高分?
2020-01-14 15:58 | 編輯:川外外語(yǔ)培訓(xùn)中心 來(lái)自:未知導(dǎo)讀:本文川外培訓(xùn)小編整理了六個(gè)和考官引共鳴的方法,希望大家能夠參考。
新SAT考試中寫(xiě)作雖然不算入總分,但卻是招生官考核學(xué)生的重要標(biāo)尺。如何能讓新SAT寫(xiě)作吸引招生官的眼睛,在招生官那拿到高分,是同學(xué)們非常關(guān)心的話(huà)題。本文小編整理了六個(gè)和考官引共鳴的方法,希望大家能夠參考。
1、多運(yùn)用動(dòng)詞和主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)
在文章中把一個(gè)主要的名詞換成動(dòng)詞
例:Verb to be :the use of leaf blowers before 8 am is a violation of local noise abatement laws.
Action verb :the use of leaf blowers before 8 am violates local noise abatement laws.
用動(dòng)詞替代句子中的某一個(gè)重要的名詞或形容詞
例:Verb to be :The quarterback’s wretched performance was a disgrace to his team.
Action verb :The quarterback’s wretched performance humiliated his team.
如果不知如何更改動(dòng)詞,可以重新整理語(yǔ)句形式
例:Verb to be :Jamie was happy to be part of the all-star soccer team.
Action verb : Being a part of the all-star soccer team thrilled Jamie.
主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)
例:Passive Voice :the main idea for my essay was stated as the first sentence in the first paragraph.
Active Voice : I stated the main idea of my essay in the first sentence in the first paragraph.
Passive voice : money for the new recreation building was raised quickly.
Active voice: the recreation committee quickly raised money for the new building.
2、在文章中使用specific words
少general words,多增加specific images。這兩者怎么區(qū)別呢?我們來(lái)舉個(gè)例子,car就是general words,因?yàn)檐?chē)的種類(lèi)有很多,而B(niǎo)enz SUV 就是specific words。在考試的中,多使用specific words可以幫助把物體解釋的更清楚,讀者也會(huì)獲得更多的信息,使他們對(duì)你的文章更方便了解。
例1: General :Tom got into his car and drove off.
Specific :Tom leaped into his SUV and roared off.
例2:General: My coach illustrates the point about playing fairly.
Specific: My basketball coach, Ms Berry, illustrates the essay- ist’s point about playing fairly.
例3:General: At the end of the day, the workmen walked up the snow-covered road.
Specific: At the end of the day, the tired workmen trudged wearily up the snow-covered road.
3、使用簡(jiǎn)單詞匯
在寫(xiě)作中,有的同學(xué)習(xí)慣使用一些例如 ugly as sin, pretty as a picture之類(lèi)的詞匯。在這里,小編建議大家不要使用這類(lèi)詞匯。因?yàn)樵谑褂眠@些詞匯的時(shí)候,會(huì)給讀者一種陳詞濫調(diào)、平淡無(wú)味的感覺(jué),更有可能使讀者誤會(huì)你本身的意思。
General :I was shaking in my boots before the interview,but I was happy as a lark when the personnel manager offered me the job.
Improved :I was terrified before the interview, but I was ecstatic when the personnel manager offered me the job.
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4、使用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)句
寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候,盡量的使用簡(jiǎn)單易懂的詞匯語(yǔ)句,可以使讀者更清楚的明白你的立場(chǎng)和你文章的目的。要記住,SAT寫(xiě)作不是考察你的生詞量,而是在考察你是否能將你的想法通過(guò)文字的方式傳遞給讀者。
例 :To facilitate input by the maximum number of potential purchasers, questionnaires were designed and posted well in advance of the launch of the promotional marketing campaign.
Improved :Before we began advertising, we designed and mailed a marketing survey to find out what customers were looking for.
通過(guò)比較,我們可以清楚的明白,上面的句子,使用了一些不必要的詞匯,而導(dǎo)致句子看上去繁瑣難懂。下面的句子,經(jīng)過(guò)編改,變得簡(jiǎn)單易懂。
5、避免使用俚語(yǔ)
SAT的寫(xiě)作,要求的是一篇有專(zhuān)業(yè)性的寫(xiě)作,而不是一篇日記或隨筆,所以俚語(yǔ)不應(yīng)該在SAT的考試中出現(xiàn)。就好像是高考作文中,考生把“我要去…”寫(xiě)成“俺要去…”加有地方方言的語(yǔ)言方式。
例1:Brian’s mother reprimanded him for blowing his physic test.
Improved :Brian’s mother reprimanded him for failing his physic test.
同樣的,考生在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候,也應(yīng)該盡量避免太多學(xué)術(shù)性強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言。批卷的老師很有可能并不像你一樣是個(gè)電腦高手。他或她可能只明白一些初級(jí)的電腦詞匯,對(duì)于那些技術(shù)性強(qiáng)的詞匯,也許一竅不通。
例2:Close-support, transport, and reconnaissance assistance is provided by the S-3X helicopter, which is the most cost effective in a crane configuration.
Improved :The S-3X helicopter provides support, transportation, and reconnaissance. However, the helicopter is most cost effective when it works as a crane.
6、合并短句,截?cái)嚅L(zhǎng)句
合并短句可以讓你的文章更連貫,讀者閱讀的時(shí)候思路也會(huì)更清晰。
例1:The glee club held a fund-raiser, the basketball team also held a fundraiser.
Improved sentences :The glee club and the basketball team held fundraisers (compound subject).
例2:The most valuable player on the basketball team will give the graduation speech. She is the star of this year’s musical.
Improved sentences: The most valuable player on the basketball team, who is also the star of this year’s musical, will give the graduation speech (appositive).
例3:The wide receiver ran down the field. He caught the winning touchdown pass.
Improved sentences: Running down the field, the wide receiver caught the winning pass (modifying phrase).
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